Meliorating mystery turns to stillborn assumptions (2/5)
My 22nd Brunner
novel happens to be one which was serially published in Amazing Stories (December
1966 and February 1967). This isn’t an usual practice for Brunner, who also
published similar serial novels before in 1966 (The
Productions of Time) and in 1964 (The Enigma of Tantalus) but
also continued creating serial novels throughout his career, such as The
Evil That Men Do (1969) and The Stone That Never Came Down (1973).
What makes Born Under Mars distinguishable from his other serial novels
is the sheer difference in direction and quality between the two halves: the
first being a cauldron of mystery which develops flavors as it stews and the
second half being heavily salted with assumptions, stereotypes, and
genealogical lineage.
Rear cover synopsis:
“When mankind colonized the
stars, it developed into two different, antagonistic types that had left Mars
behind. As well, they had left behind the dead-end Mars-born mutations—with
which man had once testes his adaptiveness—on a world that had since fallen
into apathy and decay.
But when secret agents of the
two branches of humanity focused their unwelcome attention on the most recent star
mission of one such mutation, he had no time to ponder the plight of his home
planet.
For Ray Mallin found himself
the unwitting key to a secret that could affect the entire future of mankind.”
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Once having departed their home
system of Sol, two lineages of human stock settled in the north and south: the
Bears and the Centaurs. The Bears, “permissive and casual”, and the Centaurs,
“rigid and disciplined” (98), left behind the rest of humanity stranded on the
bodies of Earth and Mars. Free from the homogenization, social norms, and
behavioral governances of the rest of humanity, the two diasporic sects evolved
into two drastically different forms of humanity: the Bears “cheerfully
accepting randomness as a major factor or life” and the Centaurs with a
“society rigidly pre-planned” (145).
Ray Mallin is a Martian who is
skilled in four-space engines but stuck out of the system for want of return
passage back to Mars. He’s fond of the casual ways of the Bears, especially the
welcoming Bear girls, and dislikes the staunchly formal Centaurs, a feeling
backed by Earth’s common allegiance to the Bears. A chance encounter allows him
a bunk on a Centaur ship, but his entire time aboard is occupied by caring for
the splenetic engines of an overpowered linear. Back on Mars and thankful for
the return trip, he is immediately taken into custody and subjected to lashes
with a nerve-ship. To cope with the pain and clear his mind, Ray uses the
teachings and techniques of his childhood teacher, Thoder.
Visiting Thoder at a later
time, Ray recaps the time he has spent on Mars since returning on that dreaded
ship: tortured to within an inch of his life, dumped on the surface of Mars
nearly drowning on sand trickling through his mask, picked up and cared for by an
Earth couple, and told of his five-generation lineage on Mars. It had been a
bizarre homecoming and Ray wants a few answers, but Thoder isn’t prepared to
reveal to Ray the extend of the mysteries behind his return.
Clarity doesn’t come to Ray
after he wakes up and realizes two things: he doesn’t own a null-gee bed and
more time has elapsed than can be accounted for. His homecoming maintains its
surrealism. Returning to the apartment of the Earth couple, Ray is greeted with
a hesitant smile and a jerky welcome. The couple produce a lie about caring for
a friend’s child, a lie which is established when Ray is further greeted by the
visiting “doctor” who has a noticeable Bear accent. Considering Ray’s past few
days experiencing torture, lies, and missing time, Ray is getting more
irritable as events progress towards an unforeseen apex.
Between the cold warring
differences of the Bears and Centaurs is more than the prying schism of
culture; rather, they represent two eugenic furcations of humankind’s progress
toward an uncertain future. Back in humanity’s home system of Sol, the human
genetic code’s obsequence for evolutional superiority has slacked, resulting in
a homogenous and stagnant population on Earth and a seemingly flawed genetic
pool on Mars. At the center of his genetic proliferation and stagnation is the
child… some say rescued, others say kidnapped. This pinnacle of progeny is both
mankind’s hope and Ray Mallin’s bane of existence.
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Most of the five-paragraph synopsis above reflects the first half of
the novel. It’s a great beginning which follows an ordinary Mars man and down
on his lucky yet lucky enough to get a trip back home with a generous bonus.
The odd series of events which Ray finds himself in generates a great amount of
interest in exactly where Brunner is taking this veering plot of his. And just
after the halfway point (a dozen pages before the True® cigarette advertisement between pages 96 and 97), things turn sour.
As mentioned in the introduction, this novel is a serial novel. The
second half of the novel takes all the tantalizing strings from the first half
and, rather than gather them nicely into a tidy skein, Brunner makes a gnarly
tangle of the fine threads. The synopsis relays an importance of (1) genealogy,
(2) genetic diversity, and (3) social differentiation; these three vague
aspects of the plot come into play in the second half of the novel, but their
vagueness and interest soon evaporate when the intensity of the subjects
becomes too much.
(1) The importance of the
genealogical thread comes late into the game like a second-string team, and, much
like a second-string team, the sub-performance is disappointing in light of the
great mystery which unfolds in the first half. Too many lineages from too many
sects come into fold where all importance is muddled and all interest wanes in
the confusion.
(2) The genetic variety
of the Bear and Centaur population seems to be in response to the genetic
stagnation of Earth and Mars, but over the course of five or six generations
for which the human colonies have separated from Sol system, there seems to be
too rigid a system to enable such behavior in the colonies behaviors: the Bears
are naturally casual, the Centaurs are naturally disciplined. Brunner
attributes these overarching attributes to each sect’s social norms, but
formative genetics also plays a role in the scheme.
(3) The diametric
cultures of the Bears and Centaurs is a little tiring, where the reader is
reminded of the polar differences three different times, at length (two
instances quoted in the synopsis above). As Joachim
has said on Born Under Mars, “Cultures are never monolithic,
stereotypes are bad and the cultures on other planets (besides Mars) need more
description than a few adjectives.” Brunner’s justification for this bipolar diversity
is good, not feeble or flimsy, but the simple-minded inclusion of the genetic and
social schism between the two populations is generic.
On the one last negative side… Brunner teases the reader by mentioning multi-generational
arks seeding the galaxy after the invention of four-space drivers. All authors
should understand this point: NEVER tease the reader about multi-generational
arks seeding the galaxy! The very idea and limited access to stories (including
Brunner’s own “Lung Fish” [1957] in Entry
to Elsewhen [1972]) is upsetting to hardcore science fiction readers
who crave this sacred niche of their preferred genre. There hasn’t been a
decent take on the theme for quite a while now, nothing refreshing from the
themes of yore produced by Heinlein (“Universe” [1941]) and Aldiss (Non-Stop
[1956]).
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This isn’t one of Brunner’s worst novels, a dubious honor held by Give
Warning to the World (1959) and The Wrong End of Time (1979),
but it does sink to the bottom of the heap of castoffs. This isn’t a keeper. If
it were just more focused on the mystery surrounding Ray Mallin, and his unfortunate
circumstances with the ship he arrived on, rather than the non-so-exciting
manipulation of genetics and society across the stars… saying that, it does
sound enticing, but the delivery is of a stillborn plot in the second half.
One of my least favorite of Brunner's -- very disappointing. I found that the pieces were in place for a much more interesting story. BUT, unfortunately, the story bloats out to such huge proportions.
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