Laden with misplaced details and reasoning (3/5)
Of the most prolific authors lining my shelves, just behind Greg Bear
(21), John Brunner (19), Larry Niven (18), Frederik Pohl (16), and Iain
Banks (16) is Poul Anderson. This 15th book of Anderson's is one of my
dwindling supply of classic Anderson, whose paperbacks are increasing
difficult to find in second-hand bookstores. Like Banks, Bear, and
Brunner, Anderson's works are usually a hit, which can't be said for
Pohl's works that tend to be misses more often than not. Unfortunately,
Anderson doesn't pen one of his best with The People of the Wind. Much
like Anderson's bibliography, there are some "hit" elements and some
"miss" elements that compose The People of the Wind.
Rear cover synopsis:
"Terra + Ythri + Avalon = Universal War!
THE
TERRAN EMPIRE: Behemoth, reaching ever further across the star systems,
seeking to suck the entire universe into its gigantic maw. In its favor
it must be said that the Empire offers peace and prosperity to its
subjects.
THE YTHRIAN DOMAIN: Medium-sized empire with room to
grow... except where it borders meet those of the Terran Empire! Peopled
by the Ythri, birdlike beings with a culture and intellect that is
easily a match for the Terran way of life.
AVALON: Colony planet of
the Ythri but inhabited by human and Ythri alike, Avalon is the Domain's
secret weapon--or is it? For Avalon has formed a culture all its own,
which it will defend against all comers. And Avalon seems quite capable
of defying the combined might of the most powerful empires in the
universe!"
Chris Holm is well-adjusted to the unique culture of
the planet Avalon. With human parents in the upper echelons of the
planetary military infrastructure, Chris sits on the social cusp between
the human culture and Ythrian culture, a culture he has embraced by
befriending the avian aliens and assuming the Ythrian name Arinnain. His
Ythrian "sister" Eyath is very close to him and he often regards her as
his spiritual partner, but she has become betrothed with a space pilot,
soon to put into active duty against the approaching Terran navy.
The
Human/Ythrian loose government takes a seemingly pragmatic approach to
the navy's war stance. When two Ythrian planets fall to the Terran navy,
the last battle and the occasion of "death-pride" is left to the planet
of Avalon, whose human contingent has seen the planet through its
military preparedness. The aggressive Terran navy seems set on subsuming
all three planets for the Terran Empire, with no compassion for
cultural sanctity.
When a Terran ship crashes upon Avalon,
Chris's possible female human interest, Tabitha, is quick to charm the
captain in a nubile fashion. Chris realizes the ultimate gain when
applying a guilt trip and hopes for a positive outcome for his clan, his
family, his love life, and the bi-cultural planet of Avalon.
Anderson
put some very careful detail in making the Ythrian race of bird-like
creatures. Their physiology is well detailed along their tacit beliefs
and cultural heritage. Most of this is viewed through the eyes of the
young protagonist Chris or through dialogue between him and his avian
kin. It pays to keep close attention to the cultural details because
they spring up throughout the book, highlighting the difficulties the
planet faces against the Terran navy and the personal problems Eyath
experiences after the human crash land on Avalon.
I wish the same
attention was kept when describing the planet of Avalon. The physical
characteristics of its orbit, density, atmosphere, moon system, etc. is
thrown in during the first 25% of the book. The number-heavy details
shown a lot of thought, but the way it lacked integration was
off-putting. The same goes for Anderson's laborious insertion of the
names of planetary fauna, the name of function of each are all
peripheral and adds little but words to the passages involved. The
insertions are awkward and generally lack relevance.
I never
found the logic behind the Terran attack on the Ythrian Domain to be
sensible. It seemed as if they were attacking in order to subsume the
Domain simply because they didn't want the Ythrians to expand any
further into the Terran Empire. If each race has their own sphere of
colonization, the border between the two should be very limited. If this
one border is blocking each others colonization plans, there are many
other directions to expand: up-galaxy, down galaxy, spinward,
anti-spinward, up, down, left, right... however you want to describe the
directions of galactic flight. This ONE conflict seems senseless to
concentrate the entire Terran naval fleet at that one point against
three planets. The planets aren't even part of any greater strategy.
Besides
the Ythrian descriptions, the depth of the harmonious human/Ythrian
relationship on Avalon is great to delve in to. The relationship on
government level all the way down to personal level is full of nuances
and subtleness. The Ythrians obviously have their cultural weaknesses,
and considering that the planet of Avalon is part of their Domain, the
humans accept their minority and fill the leadership niche which is left
void by the Ythrian's disinterest in larger organization.
Many
of the parts of this novel are noteworthy, but its Anderson's early
inability to weave all of this into a dense but savory 176-page novel
that ultimately let me down. When Anderson has a larger canvas to work
with, like in The Boat of A Million Years (1989),
he has the freedom to explore the intimate details of his bursting
creativity and the ability to pen a fulfilling novel with as many ideas
as he can shake a stick at. The People of the Wind was just to dense to
feel like a smooth Anderson novel. Whether there were to many ideas
bursting at the seams or just a limited number of pages restricting
Anderson's creativity, a rewrite of this book into a fuller 300-page
novel would have been epic to witness.
I enjoyed this Anderson :(
ReplyDeleteBut I couldn't agree more, this fleshed out into a 300 page epic would be stellar...